Sunday, 16 December 2012

individual self evaluation.

For my Creative Media Practice Project, myself and my project partner, Dani, decided to try and create an audio piece designed around a football game. Our aim was to create the feel of walking through a match day at Bramall Lane. Our piece begins from the point where you get to the football ground, it continues through to the kick-off and carries on right until end of the match, revealing which team won the game. We collected interview style voice clips of some fans from both football teams, but with our main focus on Sheffield United. We used these to add a personal view to the piece. We asked each fan to recount their favourite moment as a fan, and to tell us what it was that attracted them to the match day experience. We also asked why they supported the team. We then chose the best ones to feature in our piece.

The style of our audio piece was inspired by ‘Meat Factory Earworms’ by Richie Beirne. This is a piece designed to explain what it was like working in a slaughterhouse in Ireland, he uses music to add a sense of emotion to the piece. The main focus of the audio is Richie Beirne talking about his time in the meat factory, and the different stories he had about the place. This is played over various different songs, each with an explanation to the connection it has to the specific time in his life, relating to the meat factory.

We originally planned to work to this style, relying on a voice over to determine our ‘sense of place’ and carry our narrative, at the same time relying on an underlining atmos track to support the vocal piece. However, after recording our background sound, we decided it would be more effective if we left that as a stand alone recording, but using interview style question and answer clips to give a more personal feel of the subject. The idea is that they are reminiscing about their favourite moments in football, or the proudest moment they’ve witnessed in relation to their team.

Our experimental film was inspired by classic documentary style films based around the historical side of football. We decided to collect footage from an archive website of old football matches, and incorporate these into our piece. This plays on the idea that the piece is meant to be reminiscent of the fans favorite time in relation to their football team. We also chose to include recent footage of outside of the clubs to show a contrast between old and new, and therefore creating a sense of place through time.

Our target audience is quite broad. It could be said that this piece is aimed at football fans as it is obviously about the sport itself, and the fan base behind it. However, it is not specifically for the fans as it also offers people the insight into the passion behind the fan base and the sport itself.

Throughout our project, we faced a few minor setbacks. For example, after contacting the media staff at Bramall Lane, the football ground that is home to Sheffield United, asking their permission to come onto the grounds and either record some footage of their training session, or at least to collect audio of the crowd during a game, we were told that they did not have the correct facilities to accommodate our request, and therefore we they were unable to give us permission. To resolve this issue we decided to collect the footage from outside the grounds, and to see if we were able to collect the sound from outside the grounds as well. Although we initially thought this would hinder our project slightly due to the quality of footage not being as good as it could be, or the lack of contemporary footage from inside a football game, it actually worked well and the quality of our work was not affected too much by the change of plan.

After presenting our work to the audience of our peers and tutors, we received some really useful feedback in relation to what was good about the piece, and what could be improved. For example, it was quickly made obvious that the levels needed adjusting within the editing stage of our piece. This is due to only listening to the piece through headphones, and completely disregarding the need to check our sound levels. Another useful piece of feedback we received was how we should try and incorporate close up sounds of actual the actual football game, for example a clip of the ball being kicked which would represent kick-off.

Thankfully, we were lucky enough to not experience any technical issues throughout the project, other than being unable to play our piece to our tutor during a tutorial.

Personally I feel that the interview style questions really worked as it added a whole other level onto the piece, providing it with the personal touch of actual fans.  Also, I really liked the individual emphasised sounds, for example the police horse shoes on the ground, and the charity change buckets being shaken. However, I do feel like with the permission of the media staff in Bramall Lane, we could have collected some better footage of the football match itself in order to create a better comparison piece for our experimental film piece.

We began our planning stage with a choice of five topics to work with. These were, Industrial, Nature, Home life, Student life and Sport. We decided to chose sport as Sheffield, a city both Dani and myself were unfamiliar with, has two successful football teams, Sheffield United and Sheffield Wednesday. We decided to utilise the fact they were both so accessible, and use one of them in our piece. This gave us the opportunity to discover a bit more about the city we both have chosen to live in, as well as allowing us to find out more about the sport as neither of us had used football in our work before.

At the beginning of our planning stage, we decided to focus mainly on the voice over, and use that as our narrative. We planned to design the atmospheric tracks around the voice over. The voice over itself was either going to be two people, one a particularly older fan, and a younger fan. This was to show the diversity between the fans, and to create a broader coverage of their proudest moments. It was our aim to have the voice overs explain their personal views on football, and their proudest moments of their teams. It was going to be a continuous track of them talking, and then include the atmos tracks as a sort of back up to that.


However, after going to the Bramall Lane football grounds for the first time, alone, I heard the cacophony of interesting sounds, each one combining to create a narrative in itself. This inspired a change of plan, and therefore we agreed it would be create a more interesting piece if we relied more on the atmos track to create the narrative, and change the interview clips to the supporting audio.

Because of this change of plan, we decided to go back to Bramall Lane a second time to collect more detailed sounds. For example, close up sounds of the police horses, close up sounds of the turnstiles and to collect clearer recordings of the chanting.

The next stage of production was the editing. After we decided to allow the atmos track to create the narrative, we then began adding more amplified, and more detailed sounds to our original atmos track. We amplified the sounds of the police horses, turnstiles, chanting, traffic, program salesmen, and charity bucket change collectors. Each sound created a sound-scape of the overall experience of a standard match day.

On top of this we included the interview snippets we had collected. We edited these until we had the best clips remaining. These were the older man explaining his loyalty to his team, as well as his reasons for enjoying the general match day atmosphere, and the younger man who explained his reasons for coming to the football, as well as explaining his loyalty to the team. We tried to be diverse in our choices, so as to gain a broader coverage of what the sport means to the fans. To do this we used a variety of ages, but unfortunately we were only able to collect voices of males, we attempted to interview a woman but she directed us to her husband. This was unfortunate because it would have added to the diversity, and break out of the stereotypes that it is only men that enjoy football. Although we were unable to do this, the answers we did collect definitely added a personal level to the audio piece.

As we developed our piece, it started sounding less and less like I had imagined, but in a good way. We adapted our ideas to adjust to the changes we had to make, for example the fact we could not collect footage from inside the grounds. However, I am still really pleased with the end result.

As well as enjoying the project, I feel it has given me the opportunity to learn how to use SoundTrack Pro, as I had never had the chance to use this software before it was definitely useful. Because of this I can now confidently use SoundTrack Pro to create a decent audio piece. As well as this, I was able to improve on PremierPro. I had used this software before, but this has definitely improved my originally basic skills.

As well as learning to use the editing software, I was able to learn how to successfully use a professional marantz. The fact I had never used one before was definitely a hindrance, but luckily Dani, my project partner, had done, so she soon taught me the basics. I also got the opportunity to learn the difference between the boom mic, which we used to collect atmospheric sound, and the standard mono mic which we used to collect the interview style questions and answers.

Overall, I feel like I worked really well as part of a team. Dani and myself decided the fairest way to split the jobs was to do all of them together, or to take turns doing particular stages of production. For example, we took it in turns to ask the questions to our interviewees, as well as taking it in turns to edit our work. This allowed us both to improve our basic knowledge of how the editing software worked, and also allowed us both to equally experience what it was like to go out to film and collect audio.  We both offered creative input to the piece, and confirmed each and every change we made with each other. This was in order to remain equal in the levels of work we were doing. As well as this, we looked for each others opinion on each change.

I feel that my strengths within the team was my creative input. I personally decided the project subject, and had a big part in the adaptation and development of the ideas. I feel like my weaknesses were organisation and time keeping. I feel like I relied a little too much on Dani to decide when we were meeting. Unfortunately, this has always been a personal downfall. However, I am determined to make this something I will work on in the future. I will definitely strive to change this for future projects, and I hope I am able to do so.

I personally really enjoyed this project as it gave me an opportunity to learn and understand sound production a lot more, as that is a stage in production I have not worked on before. Also, I think that the fact I have had a positive experience with working in pairs, definitely had an overall positive effect on our project.

Saturday, 15 December 2012

peer feedback.



- great atmos
- good use of interview style
- not clear answers
- need to lower levels
- too much space between each answer
- try to isolate the chant





good football atmosphere -
nice idea and concept - 
tells a story - different perspectives -




- can't always understand what the people are saying
- like the little girls speech
- like the horses trotting and the football stadium noises + chants








need to adjust levels -  
could have the sound of a football being kicked -







- to loud in parts
- did well to get so many people to contribute
- get clearer chants, maybe go to pubs before and get people to sing
- ask football fans to sing outside the stadium

Friday, 14 December 2012

first play.

Today I played our audio piece to the group and Dom and Debbie. I received some really good feedback, and also some help on how to develop our film piece as well.

Everyone gave me post-it notes with their thoughts on what was good and what could be improved, also Debbie and Dom gave me spoken improvement tips, as well as telling me what they liked.

This was a really useful session as now I can take everything that everyone said into consideration when making the final changes to our piece.

Tuesday, 11 December 2012

post secret.

PostSecret is an ongoing art project created by Frank Warren. Within this project people mail Frank their secrets anonymously on a home-made postcard. Selected secrets are then posted on the PostSecret website every Sunday.

Every day dozens of postcards with intimate secrets still make their way to Warren, with postmarks from around the world,touching on every aspect of human experience.

Not only is this an ongoing art project,Warren has worked tirelessly as a volunteer and advocate for HopeLine, a suicide-prevention organization, and believes that by sharing our deepest secrets, we are able to heal ourselves and serve our communities.

I find this website, and the entire concept behind it, inspirational. Not only does each postcard hold an entire life and story behind it, they're done so creatively that it encourages other to get involved. Also, by doing this, it offers hope to people who need it, and it also does incredible work with the prevention of suicide, a topic very close to my heart.

Friday, 7 December 2012

tutorial.

Today we had a tutorial with Debbie, but due to technical difficulties we were unable to play her our piece.

Wednesday, 5 December 2012

editing our audio.


Today we finished our first draft of our sense of place audio. We managed to incorporate the best bits of the interviews (red) with our atmos track (green). we also used amplified sounds, for example of the police horses or the change buckets (yellow) these added to the piece and highlighted the sounds. 

Saturday, 1 December 2012

second trip to Bramall Lane.


Today we went to the Port Vale v Sheffield United FC football game at Bramall Lane.
Although we were unable to get permission from the media staff to film or collect audio within the grounds, we were able to get some footage of outside the grounds as well as collecting plenty of atmospheric audio from around the grounds as well. Also we were able to interview a few football fans, of both the opposing team and SUFC. Dani also got a few still shots of around the ground to use as location shots.

We are able to use almost all the footage we have, which is really good. This means that we just have the editing left to focus on.

permission to film.

As my last post shows, Dani tried to get into contact with Sheffield United Football Club, (the email I showed, as we as ringing their offices)  to ask permission to do some filming in the Hillsborough grounds, unfortunately they were not able to give us permission. Because of this set back we have had to plan other potential shots we can film instead, and we aim to add to these when we meet later on.

the king blues - 5 bottles of shampoo.


This is a poem that has inspired me. It comes from Jonny 'Itch' Fox, the lead singer of punk band, The King Blues. This is a song about the oppression of women in the modern day. Itch is showing his respect to women, and explaining how he finds it unbelievable that some men still act as if they own women, and still have no respect for them.

I think is a beautiful poem, 1 because of the content, and 2 because it branches out from the usual King Blues style.

Thursday, 29 November 2012

'meat factory ear worms'

http://www.rte.ie/radio1/doconone/the-curious-ear-doconone-meat-factory-ear-worms.html

When being introduced to different audio styles, we were played 'Meat Factory Ear Worms' by Richie Beirne. This is a documentary style audio piece following the experiences of the author. He talks about the time he worked in a meat factory "on the killing line". He goes onto introduces us to the 'musical ear worms' he uses to get through the "tough work". 

The contrast between the music and the violent atmospheric sounds of the meat factory creates a brilliant audio piece. I personally really enjoyed this piece, and therefore decided to use it as style inspiration for my own piece.

Tuesday, 20 November 2012

first trip to Bramall Lane.


Tonight I went over to Bramall Lane, the home of Sheffield United FC. I wanted to try and record some sound for our project. I managed to get some rough audio, just so we had some sound to play around with, and also to see what the quality would be as we were unable to get permission to record inside the ground, and therefore had to do all of our recording from outside. 

As it was only a rough piece, I used the sound recording software installed on my phone to record various parts of the match. I manage to get some chants from the home team as well as general football atmos. This has given us a starting point, and the change to plan in more detail what we would like to have recorded for next time.

listener - seatbelt hands.



'Listener' is an American 'talk-music' band made up of  Dan Smith and Christin Nelson. I find myself inspired by this band, mainly because of the way they seem to see the world. Not only is the music good, the subject of each of their songs, and the content in the lyrics is always so moving. They talk about things such as the vulnerability of life, the damage words can do and other stuff as well. 

When listening to any of their songs I always find myself imagining them as a short film. I watched an online documentary with Dan Smith once and the way he talked about his songs showed the passion behind them, and he explained about some of the amazing stories behind them as well.

Tuesday, 13 November 2012

'sense of place' final idea.

After some consideration of various different ideas, we decided to focus on Sport, due to the fact that we have two fairly big teams in Sheffield - Sheffield United, and Sheffield Wednesday. We decided that as we have the chance and the opportunity to collect our own material and learn more about the community, we will focus on Sheffield United.

We are going to try and produce a documentary style piece of audio, following the experimental style of personal view. This way we can collect interview style sound clips of fans explaining their fondness of the team, and the sport in general. We will use 'match-day sounds' as our underlining audio track, and incorporate the interview questions within this.

Tuesday, 6 November 2012

'sense of place' ideas.

Industrial.
We felt that it would be a good idea to utilize Sheffield's industrial connections and recreate a similar style to 'Meat Factory Ear Worms'. With this as inspiration we thought we could create an audio piece focusing on the contrast between city life and life inside a factory. We also thought that because Sheffield is known for it's factories, they would be accessible and easy to include.

Nature.
In contrast to Sheffield's famous factories, it is also known for it's beautiful peak district. The contrast between factories and country side was also an idea. Or in fact the contrast between city and countryside.

Student Life.
As we are students we thought this would be an easy topic to explore. We had many ideas associated with student life. We thought we could show the nightlife side of university, as well as the studying side. We thought about doing audio recordings of the library, and then a standard night out to show the different sides of student life. However, we thought this idea may be too easy and not challenging enough.

Home/Family.
We thought we would involve the importance of family, maybe using an interview style, having students recount their fond memories of home. We also thought we would incorporate travelling, mainly focussing on the train station. This will highlight the fact that we're students and that the majority of us are living away from home and away from our families.

Sport.
Focussing on football, we thought we would show the patriotic side of sport. We would talk to fans of the local team, Sheffield United, and get them to recount fond memories of their team. This would highlights loyalty, which is a positive aspect of sport. This idea came from the lack of positive coverage that football gets within the media. We felt it was too easy to put a negative spin on the sport, and address issues such as hooliganism. 

'sense of place' ideas.


Saturday, 3 November 2012

a photograph.


I found this photograph on 'StumbleUpon' which is a website which takes you through random webpages on the internet. 

Growing up in a tiny village in the south of England has given me a facination of big cities. This picture highlights this. I love the complexities behind cities. Everyone has somewhere to be, and people to see. It is never still, or quiet. The beauty of this picture is that it highlights this, even really early in the morning, or really late at night, there is still lights of the cars going past, the lights in the buildings are still on, people are still living their lives, they never stop.

On top of that, it is just a generally beautiful image, I love that the cursor acts as the sun, and we get to experience the city at each step of the day. 

Wednesday, 17 October 2012

steel homes - eva weber.


Steel homes is a short documentary focusing on a storage facility used by people who are unwilling to let go of personal belongings, but no longer want them in their everyday lives. This documentary is a personal insight into a handful of peoples lives, using their voices to walk us, the audience, through their stories.

I think the primary aim of this documentary is to show the connection people can have to their possessions, and the items which hold direct links to events in their lives. I think the director is also trying to show how these items are store away so they can come back to them to bring happiness once again.
However, I feel that there is a sad undertone to the documentary, the lack of music within this short film creates an air of loneliness, the silence is only broken by the reminiscent narrative of each person. This also links with the people who enter the warehouse, as they keep themselves hidden away, and only reveal what they wish people to know, they don't interact with each other or show any interest in the other people's lives or belongings. 

Another thing I noticed which I felt highlighted the sad undertone was the fact we as the audience was never shown the insides of the individual storage units. I feel this was done to secure the idea of the secret lives behind the doors. 

Saturday, 13 October 2012

love me or leave me alone - duane hopkins.



'Love me or Leave Me Alone' was directed by Duane Hopkins. The 15 minute film has been described as "A study in the articulations and limitations of first love". I feel that the directors primary aim is to create a relationship between the viewer and each of the characters within the film. The main focus of the film is the confusion of first love, which is a subject everyone can relate to.


Overall I enjoyed the film, and I believe it was successful in dealing with it's subject matter. The subject matter in this case is "the relationship of an inexperienced teenage couple endures its first conflict". Due to the intimacy of the film, I feel that the audience is able to create a relationship with both of the characters.


The social realism approach used within this film highlights the simple narrative, which I found effectively caught the attention, demanding the main focus onto the two characters.  The low key lighting and dark settings further isolates the characters, making them feel like the only people with any importance. This could be seen as playing on the naivete of teenagers who are generalised as being self centred. The honesty of both characters, and the isolation they seem to live within creates a strong connection between them and the viewer as they are the soul focus of the film.


The narrative within the story shows the twists and turns of the complex teenage relationship. This is not reflected in the linear narrative structure.